Have cover art, Need help with tagline!

I’ve previously mentioned I.O.U. Wife, a WIP I work on from time to time. I’ve located and purchased cover art for it from Estrella Cover Art. Ta-da!!!  Whadaya think?

Unfinished cover art for I.O.U. WifeIt doesn’t have my stuff on it yet because I’m working on coming up with a tagline to add to it and that’s where you come in. I need input. So far, I’ve got:

Traded like cattle, she married a stranger to settle her pa’s gambling debt!

Or… She married a stranger to settle her pa’s gambling debt! (Actually, this one doesn’t address that she had no say in the matter. I’ve got to get that across somehow.)

Or… A stranger called in her pa’s I.O.U. and took her as his wife.

I’d love some feedback. Which do you prefer? Got another idea you think would fly? Feel free to make suggestions, though it needs to be short and say a lot.

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About Carol Burnside / Annie Rayburn

Carol Burnside is an award-winning author of the Sweetwater Springs series of contemporary romance with serious sizzle and a variety of other works, some written as Annie Rayburn. Her novel length manuscripts have placed in numerous contests and won five, including the prestigious Maggie Award for Excellence. Carol / Annie blogs here and on www.PetitFoursAndHotTamales.com.
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4 Responses to Have cover art, Need help with tagline!

  1. Tag line #3 is the best :)

  2. abhac says:

    Yep, like the third one for sure :)

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